OK sure, to summarize for you to take it to the next level:
Safari
1. I will recommend you try to source gen hands. I know its mikey hands the best alternative to gen available, but mikey hands look very different from gen hands in terms of shape, stack and shine. When it comes to AP frankens, gen hands complete the watch IMHO. I do own enough gen APs, and worked on enough reps/frankens to know the differences.
2. If it is emulating a H series Safari, the cyclop may need upgrading. I cannot tell for sure from that angle.
3. The tachy/bezel gap can be improved
4. When you hold the watch dial facing you, the left bottom plot is at an odd angle. The plots may be upgraded to properly emulate the way they nestle against the case
5. Again, unsure if its due to the angle, the crown seems offset toward the lower crown guard instead of being dead center like ROO crowns should
These are what I can see from casual observation. Please regard them as pointers for improvements rather than "call outs"
25721 beast
1. Likewise, gen hands if you can find them. The hands look too flat and are of the wrong shape and geometry.
2. The magnification of the date is way too big, from looks of it
3. The 25721 beast uses a dedicated date font.
Jurgenk has a datewheel in his franken beast which looks close enough to be passable. The 7s should be hooked and there are a few more particularities.
4. Do get the crown alignment checked. Another little spoken tell of an AP franken is the position of the crown. Yes it is correctly recessed toward the caseback, but often not centered within the crown groove when viewed dial-on.
5. Overall, watch looks way too new for a 25721. A service polish can explain this though..
On the forums from your pics, I can immediately tell that the watches aren't gen, but in real life, they will both look like nice AP watches and depending on your level of fussiness, the above I mentioned may or may not matter to you. I view AP frankens as customized watches built to entertain and amuse the owner, and not AP watches, so they should be enjoyed as such without too much fuss as they will never be gen no matter what is done to them. Your watches look lovely
ThePlayboy and I am certain that they will serve you well in real life. Here in the forums, it is easy to see and discuss the areas of improvement, but it is significantly a lot harder in real life to do so.
Well done on the frankens and do share more pics with us in the pictures section!